Fan fiction alert - I actually finished another story!

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Fan fiction alert - I actually finished another story!

Post by SadArticle » Tue Mar 09, 2004 5:13 am

I'm going to be brave and *yoik* my fan fiction announcement out of the dead thread where I hid it previously :wink:

For your general perusal, a short scene between Michael and Kitt, inspired by a Bob Seger song:

Turn The Page

It's for anybody who wonders, like me, about the journey and not the destination, and how driver, computer, or both, didn't completely flip after spending so many hours trapped with each other's company :wink:

Feedback always welcome! :idea:

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We'll never get the smell out of the upholstery - Kitt, Knightlines

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Post by Christine Silver » Tue Mar 09, 2004 7:09 am

This was nice. It saved me from the boredome of a Flash class ^__^ I liked KITT's lines; although it was a little sad what Michael thought about him (I mean, not being able to have eye contact and such...). But I really liked it, honestly! :)

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Post by knightshade » Tue Mar 09, 2004 7:18 pm

Superbly done, SadArticle. I like the gloomly, bad day tone and the excellent dialog. :wink:

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Post by SadArticle » Wed Mar 10, 2004 5:06 pm

Thanks for replying, Christine Silver and Knightshade (eep! I can personalise my thanks! :? )

'Campaign contribution' is in the post, Knightshade :wink:
We'll never get the smell out of the upholstery - Kitt, Knightlines

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