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KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Post by Lynda414 » Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:24 pm

I pretty much hijacked the other fanfic thread, which is supposed to be for everyones fanfics. So, I decided to dedicate an entire thread to my Universe.

Here is the link for the Alternate Storyline: http://www.fanfiction.net/community/KR2 ... ine/65789/

Also, I have just released the beta version of the F.L.A.G Database. Check it out here: http://flagdatabase.weebly.com/index.html

My storyline is set in an Alternate Universe from the one the new Knight Rider is set. My universe is a direct sequel to TOS. Old characters are mentioned, and referenced to. And some even return.

But the main story centers around Katherine Long, an ex-marine. She used to be a jet pilot until F.L.A.G contacts her. Her brother, Samuel Long, was hired to drive an experimental car, but he is unable to complete his first mssion. They ask her to take on the first mission for him.

My K.I.T.T and Katherine do not get along in the beginning, K.I.T.T already being used to Samuel. My K.I.T.T has already developed a very strong personality, which sometimes goes at odds with Katherine's. The result is some very humorous banter.

My favorite quotes from this series are:

From Episode 2:
Kat: “KITT, come here and give me a hand.”
KITT: “I don't have a hand.”
Kat: “Just get your butt back here and help me out.”
KITT: “Kat, I don't have a-”
Kat: “Listen, drive around and break this door for me or I am going to go over there and rip your gear shift off.”
KITT: “On my way.”

From Episode 3:
KITT: “I knew you would see things my way.”
Kat: “I'm going to get you for this.”
KITT: “Don't worry, I'll be gentle.”
Kat: “Seriously, if this goes wrong. I am so haunting you. Think 'Christine'.”

From Episode 7:
KITT: “I am far from idle. I am also learning Latin.”
Kat: “Moving on to dead languages now?”
KITT: “It may be useful to us one day.”
Kat: “Yeah. The next time we go up against a bunch of wizards, you'll have me covered.”

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Post by 2K&3KKITT » Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:55 pm

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Post by Lynda414 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:15 am

Thank you! Please let me know what you think!

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Post by Lynda414 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:02 pm

I am setting up Memorable Quotes section of the Profiles on the FLAG site. I want to know what my reader's favorite quotes are. Please post them here for me!

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Post by My_Friend_KITT » Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:43 pm

Hey Lynda,

If I get time tonight, and I'm pretty sure I will...I think I will start at the beginning again an reread...Just as a refresher....

Sounds fun to me anyway.
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Post by Lynda414 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:45 pm

My_Friend_KITT wrote:Hey Lynda,

If I get time tonight, and I'm pretty sure I will...I think I will start at the beginning again an reread...Just as a refresher....

Sounds fun to me anyway.


All of them? You don't have to do them all tonight. I believe that you must be my biggest fan.

OMG! I have a fan! :D

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:54 pm

Did you forget about me? Waaahhh... :(

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Post by My_Friend_KITT » Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:28 pm

Hey Lynda,

I'm gonna post my fav. sayings right here for now. Then I'll tell you my fav. of the fav.'s when I figure it out....

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Post by Lynda414 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:28 pm

Of course I did not forget you Amy! *hugs* I think I am just in shock, or something. Not really thinking properly.

You know what this means? I have two fans! I'm still in shock.


And I love that line too, Kim. ^_^ Thankies for posting it, I need more! From more readers as well!

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:49 pm

Oh there are so many good quotes. How can I pick just a few? I will pick my faves eventually. When I get around to it. I have much more important things at the moment. Talk to you, oh, the next time I sign on. I will miss you! *hugs back*

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Post by Lynda414 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:57 pm

Okay, I am not getting any perspective from the live discussion of tonight's ep. Can someone help me?

I am talking about the scene in tonights KARR ep, where Billy suddenly mentions that music sharing website that he and KITT use. It being Graiman's idea that KITT get into music so he could experience the different artist's perspectives.

Is it just me, or does this remind anyone of my pilot episode? Chapter 3. Right about here:

“So, you're favorite song is 'Smooth Criminal'?” She asked. She had her hands on the wheel, but she wasn't the one steering. Her reflexes weren't quick enough to handle the highway at they speed they were going.
“It is this week.” K.I.T.T answered.
“This week?”
“It changes, Charles says that is a good thing. He was the one who advised me to listen to music. He said it would help my learning, hearing so many different perspectives at one time. He is also testing the limits of my AI by having me show preference.”


Really, is it just me? If it is, I need someone to slap some sense into me.

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:15 pm

No, I was thinking, "Holy crap! Either that is just a coincedence or someone is taking Lynda's ideas." Which, maybe it isn't a bad thing, but they didn't give you any credit.

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:16 pm

Maybe I might mention it on the KR blog on NBC.com. They may have taken your idea. That is just strange.

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Post by Lynda414 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:26 pm

Okay, it's not just me then... Now I feel more creeped out, like someone has been through my underwear drawer...

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:28 pm

A person in chat says this has happened to them before. I am thinking someone is copying without permission from author. But maybe it is legal, since the stories were copies of KR from the beginning...now I'm confusing myself. I would not make a good lawyer.

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Post by My_Friend_KITT » Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:40 am

Lynda, your a woman ahead of her time!!!!

I so totally screamed when they talked about KITT being into music!
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Post by Lynda414 » Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:47 am

My_Friend_KITT wrote:Lynda, your a woman ahead of her time!!!!

I so totally screamed when they talked about KITT being into music!


I'm wondering where that came from, since that was the first time at all that it was mentioned. I thought KI3T liked westerns... If they didn't get the idea from me... I mean they paraphrased my pilot episode pretty closely.

When was the script written? When was it shot? It had to have been before I published my pilot, right? What a weird coincendence. The BF was nudging me all through that scene while I just stared at the TV.

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Post by Sky_Blue_Civic » Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:29 am

That's odd, I was seeing the synopsis for the next episode (Exit Light Enter Knight), and the plot is eerily similar to a story I linked to my DeviantART blog from this site.
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Post by Lynda414 » Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:44 am

It's downright spooky, that's what it is. Oh, and I just uploaded Chapter two of episode eight. I am going to try to get these up rather quickly, because I have this really cool idea I want to get to before the show does. >_<

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:20 am

I can't wait for the awesome idea. I will make sure I catch up later, as I probably will be missing one or two eps. I was allowed this morning! Awesomeness!

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Post by Lynda414 » Fri Jan 23, 2009 2:57 am

The FLAG Database has had a big update. K.I.T.T has expanded his playlist. Plus, Charles has gone more in depth on his various features. The Profiles pages has been updated and a new Missions page has been added.

The FLAG Database can be found here: http://flagdatabase.weebly.com/index.html

Expect Episode 8 Chapter 3 sometime tommorrow.

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Post by Lynda414 » Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:42 am

Hello! I am taking some time now to share some of the reviews I have gotten for my Storyline! They make me feel all warm and fuzzy, and I like sharing that feeling. These are my most favorite reviews I have gotten on FF.net. ^_^

For Episode 1:

My Friend KITT 2008-12-15 . chapter 5
Hi, Lynda...I really enjoyed this story. If you post any new stories following this introduction to your universe, please let me know through the Knight Rider Online site.
If you write it, I will be a reader. So do not quit putting up the stories.

Sam 2009-01-23 . chapter 5
Dude this is great you have come up with an awesome alternative I would say you need to share this with the current creators work with them make a few episodes & keep the series alive you would be a big help. Sure make more episodes i would love to read em,


From Episode 3:

My Friend KITT 2008-12-28 . chapter 4
Hey Lynda, Good work...I loved the first 2 sentences of this Chapter. I was suprised that KITT didn't do it. *giggle*
He really knows how to hit 'em where it hurts...First with Pierce then threatening Kat's suspension.
The intensity is back and I'm loving the "What happened to Sam" story. Nicely done.
I love the Sci-Fi technology your using also. Just thought I'd add that.
So far, a wonderful episode!


From Episode 4:

mstie6 2008-12-31 . chapter 2
I've read all of these episodes and I'm enjoying them very much. I think Kat is a well-rounded character with depth and I like her interactions with KITT. I also like your attention to detail and your style. I'm a fan of the old show and the new, but I think you have an original take on it. I'll be coming back for more! Thanks.


From Episode 6:

KITTANDBILLYLUVER (Amy) 2009-01-10 . chapter 2
I absolutely love it! French...cool! It makes me wanna learn French...lol! Keep up the good work, Lynda! Thanks for the dedication. You're the best friend anyone could have, ever.


From Episode 7:

My_Friend_KITT 2009-01-16 . chapter 2
Hey Lynda,
I hadn't sent you any positive reviews on here lately...I think it is time to drum some up, huh?
I love the serious and yet fun nature of your characters and the way they play off eachother. It is the result of superb writing at its best!
I have learned now that I like everyone (even David)-Don't tell him-and that you keep them well rounded.
Keep up the AWESOME work and I will always be reading!


From Episode 8:

KisaraCrystal 2009-01-21 . chapter 1
OMG, this is so awesome, we come a very long way, I can't believe it episode 8 already. I love it, please update soon

Tamersa 2009-01-21 . chapter 1
Iv'e read all the episodes but I didnt review them sorry^^'
anyway I like this story a lot. please continue it ,Im really interested with the next twists of plot:)


I just wanted to say thank you to everyone! And I know I put up three reviews from Kim, but her reviews are just awesome. ^_^ *hugs* Thank you again!

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Post by Lynda414 » Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:48 pm

Hello all! I've been sick the past couple of days. Makes writing difficult. >_<

But, I've been in a silly (or delirious, depending) mood while I have been sick and I came up with something. I hope you guys find this as funny as I did.

I've created a 'What If?' that combines my storyline with KR08. I call it Camaro!KITT vs. KI3T. ^_^ It takes place comepletely outside of my Storyline. It's just for fun. Take a look if you feel so inclined.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4818172/1/KR2008_Side_Story_Camaro_KITT_vs_KI3T

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Post by KITTANDBILLYLUVER » Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:33 pm

Lynda414 wrote:Hello all! I've been sick the past couple of days. Makes writing difficult. >_<

But, I've been in a silly (or delirious, depending) mood while I have been sick and I came up with something. I hope you guys find this as funny as I did.

I've created a 'What If?' that combines my storyline with KR08. I call it Camaro!KITT vs. KI3T. ^_^ It takes place comepletely outside of my Storyline. It's just for fun. Take a look if you feel so inclined.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4818172/1/KR2008_Side_Story_Camaro_KITT_vs_KI3T


I'm back and ready to read! I have plenty to catch up with on the net. TTYL! :)

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Post by Lynda414 » Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:19 pm

Yay! You're back! *hugs gently* All better now?

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