Sorry about that guys. I"ve be bogged down with deadlines with work. Everything is due at the end of the year so I might not get back as much as I did. Okay here we go. Michael You're welcome. Cindy No. Michael grabs her shirt and brings her back to the chair. He makes her sit in the chair. Mic...

MICHAEL I had a feeling she would sneek out again. DEVON I'm not as young as I used to be. Michael grabs Cindy and pulls her over to the chair. He makes her sit down. MICHAEL You are staying here. Devon sits down. Michael stands by Cindy. MICHAEL (CONT'D) He's telling you the truth. Your father has ...

Devon wipes his face. DEVON You remind me of your father so much. CINDY You don't know daddy. DEVON Yes I do. He was my brother. CINDY Where is he? Devon looks down. DEVON (beat; to Cindy) He's in jail. CINDY (yells) Who put him there? DEVON I did. Cindy gets out of the ropes. Devon runs up to her a...

ACT TWO FADE IN: INT. BUILDING - DEVON'S OFFICE - DAY Devon is sitting behind the desk. Cindy is sitting in a chair tied up while Michael is standing next to Cindy keeping an eye on her. DEVON Why don't you quit this shenanigan and stay here and help us. CINDY Huh? DEVON Didn't your parents teach yo...

Tiogaw wrote:Nice script. Can't wait for more. 8D

I just got back from a mission trip. I so tired. Give me a few days to recooperate and I'll post more.

INT. CONFERNECE ROOM # 2 - CONTINUOUS Michael and Devon are still talking. DEVON I'm worred about Cindy. MICHAEL She'll be okay in that room. DEVON No I mean she is a lot like me. Michael has a shocked look on his face. MICHAEL What other surprises do you have? EXT. BUILDING - CONTINUOUS Cindy runs ...

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS Devon and Michael enter. MICHAEL Okay. What are you going to tell me? DEVON Not here. He heads for another room. DEVON (CONT'D) Let's talk in here. Devon exits. INT. MEETING ROOM #1 - CONTINUOUS Cindy is working on the handcuffs some more. INT. MEETING ROOM #2- CONTINUOUS D...

DEVON I suggest we go talk inside. INT. KNIGHT INDUSTRIES BUILDING - MEETING ROOM - DAY Devon, Michael and Cindy are sitting around a table. Devon goes over to Cindy and handcuffs her to the chair. CINDY Hey! She tries to pull it away from her. CINDY (CONT''D) Get me out of this! MICHAEL Is this nec...

Since this was my first script and I've written millions since then. I can see where I kept messing up on this one.

MICHAEL (into watch) Kitt. I need some help. INT. PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS The car's motor begins running. KITT Right away Michael. The car then begins to drive off. EXT. FENCE - CONTINUOUS As Cindy runs toward the fence. CINDY'S POV As she sees how high up the fence is. REVEAL as the car comes over...

Michael dashes off and Devon watches. Michael catches up to Cindy and grabs her arm. CINDY Let go! MICHAEL No. You're uncle has told me I need to keep an eye on you. CINDY He did not! MICHAEL Yes he did. CINDY Liar! MICHAEL Don't call me names. I'm not lying. CINDY Yes you are! I don't have an uncle...

Ci ndy continues to try and figure out how to get out. She looks around and notices a window. Cindy grabs the chair in the room and stands on it. She tries to get out of the window. DEVON It is my neice. Michael. She needs your help. MICHAEL Don't worry Devon I'll help her. DEVON She's a handful. MI...

ACT ONE FADE IN: Cindy wakes up. She is scared and isn't wearing those black clothes and ski mask now. She quickly jumps up and runs to the door and tries to open it. She can't. EXT. KNIGHT INDUSTRIES BUILDING - DAY Michael and Devon are walking around the area talking. DEVON This is very important ...

TEASER FADE IN: EXT. BANK - NIGHT As a van is parked outside. One person is in the driver's seat. INT. BANK - CONTINUOUS All three are dressed up in black clothes and wearing ski masks over their faces. David, in his 20's, Leon in his mid 20's and Cindy, 9, are in the bank. David and Leon are puttin...

Even though he has KITT to help him. MIchael ends up learning the hard way.

Let me ask you a question. What do you think Michael would do if he had a girl who could pick pocket and get out of handcuffs?

After I had written the 15 pages I had to go back and rethink the story. I didn't know what to write about the girl. So I drew from my experience. (I've been told this is the best kind that writer's draw from their experiences.) Cindy was me in the story so everything she could do was from me. Like ...

Okay so I'm in college and still taking classes. I don't know one thing about writing a script. So I buy a book on writing scripts and watch a lot of television to get an idea of what these camera directions are. I buy a script from the show so I know how the format is done. It took me forever to ge...

I was majoring in counesling at the time. So it was a psychology class. Not a writer's class. I never had to take a writer's class for my associates. I was taking tons of psychology classes. I can go ahead and re type it up since I remember how it went. I had it in my last computer and it died on me...

Ok I've been asked to post a new thread. I'll leave this open too in case people have questions. then I'll do it here too. For starters I was in college majoring in counseling. When I was just writing a story for Knight Rider. I never throught of doing a script or even having it produced. I just wan...

Do we want me to do a thread or have a talk in the chat?

T.A.H.O.E. wrote:WELCOME A BOARD Gig......

Thanks. If you guys want me to tell you how the idea for the thing came about I would probablhy have to do another thread.

I can give you some insight on how any show works. But it would take a lot of writing. Probably need another thread for that. I didn't do much with that show. So I don't know if you would be interested. It was the first script I did and looking back now I can see where I messed up a lot on that comp...

Welcome aboard Giggles! Are you a fan of the show as well? Thanks for the welcome everyone. Ironically I am a fan. I found out ages ago that producers keep complaining that these writers wouldn't watch the show. They would give them good scripts, but the didn't know the characters. So I figure if I...

At the time this discussion was going on I had lost my sister in dec of 2001. (unexplained sudden death) My mom was terminately ill with cancer and i lost her and my aunt within a month. I am glad I didn't read this when all of that was going on. I'm just a scriptwriter. I'm not famous or anything. ...