knight rider online

Summary- A young 8 year-old named Cira gets stuck in an accident; KITT and Michael manage to save Cira and get her to the hospital. When Michael has a meeting with Devon, he finds out its related to this accident, and finds out something’s wrong behind the scenes of the accident.

The first part is up on fanfiction .net. what do you guys think? I'm going to make a movie trailer 'layout' for the fic too because making trailers are...well...fun, what can i say? Also I'd like critique on the characters and how well i portray them! I want them to be as much like they would really be as possible. especially KITT and michael!

Can i just post what i have here in this category, can i put a link here, or what? I'm not quite sure whats allowed here, except i know this is the category to talk about/or post fanfics.

for now there are going to be two posts like these unless a mod. or admin delete the one in this fic archive.

OOPS I REALIZED THERE WERE TWO TOPICS SINCE A MOD/OR ADMIN GOT TO MOVING THE TOPIC SO SOON Sorry!

HERE's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2396303/1/

The fanfic archive is for old stories. You're welcomed to post a link to your story in the General Discussion section (other than board sponsored fic writing contests, full stories are usually not allowed to be posted here directly -- only the links).

Welcome to the board.

Oks. thanks for explaining that to me. I'll just post the link in the gen. board discussion then; easy enough.

and thank you for the welcome!

Oh what an awesome start! I hope you are going to write more.

I'm glad you liked it! There will be at least three more parts comming (i have quite a bit planned so expect to see more updated.)!

However when that will happen is the big question lol. but i have part two written down on paper and some of part three...so...yea...i hope it will be up in a timely fashion...just so that readers know a bit whats going on with the story's progress!

anyways, thanks for reading my fic!