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Post by rusti_knight » Wed Dec 11, 2002 4:03 pm

For those that read my TKR fic, there's a new one up: Die Another Day. Yeah, I know the title is hardly original, but it fits. The first part has been posted, do enjoy, and lemme know what's on yer mind.

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Post by libolt » Wed Dec 11, 2002 6:27 pm

Great Job so far. It looks like this could be a real emotional case for Rusti. I'm looking forward to the rest :)

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Post by Karrs_Shadow » Thu Dec 12, 2002 12:15 am

Very nice so far Rusti :D

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Post by Soul Sista » Thu Dec 12, 2002 3:09 am

From what i read so far,this might be your best work yet.Very nice,Rusti! :)

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Post by knightimmortal » Thu Dec 12, 2002 1:19 pm

I gotta agree with Soul Sista. This has the potential of being your best yet, Rusti. Very captivating. Keep it up! Need more! Crave more!!

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Part Two of Die Another Day

Post by rusti_knight » Wed Jan 08, 2003 4:56 pm

Part Two of Die Another Day is up and ready for reading. Lemme know whatcha think!

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Post by Soul Sista » Wed Jan 08, 2003 6:49 pm

Another good chapter Rusti.Keep it up! :)

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Post by Janeway » Thu Jan 09, 2003 5:32 pm

Superb stuff this, Rusti. This is shaping up to be your best fic yet!

Keep up the excellent work.

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Die Another Day, Part three

Post by rusti_knight » Sat Feb 01, 2003 7:48 pm

Has been posted. Read and enjoy. Don't forget your feedback!


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Post by Katt » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:43 am

*tries to be creative in the middle of the night* :P

Ok, I've liked this story so far, mainly because it delves into Rusti's childhood after Devon made KITT give her up, poor KITT, and gives more insight into why she's the way she is, or was, or something. It's also fun to watch the interaction between her and the girl.


I hope I was creative enough 8) :)

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Post by Soul Sista » Sun Feb 02, 2003 12:44 pm

Although the beating Rusti took from Joseph when she was little was a bit disturbing,I think it helped define Rusti's character when she got older.Although I was hoping you would have another Kitt flashback sequence from Rusti, the interaction between Emily and Beast was well done."Oh no"-two words that you don't want to see in a fanfic. :wink: I have a feeling that Emily is going to get some shocking news when Rusti and Beast get back. :cry: Keep cranking out those chapters girl!

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Cool..

Post by Janeway » Tue Feb 04, 2003 5:53 am

Gah! Finally got around to reading this, bad me for being so tardy.

The flashback scenes are pretty intense, the emotion is very real there. It obviously helped define Rusti in a big way. This story does a very good job of tying the threads together.

I also like Rocky doing magic tricks for the kid. I also liked how you managed to make Emily vulnerable and endearing without being annoying. Kudos!

Next point: More? Please?

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Die Another Day, Part Four

Post by rusti_knight » Sat Feb 22, 2003 10:52 pm

Has been posted. Enjoy, and don't forget your feedback!

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Post by IceKnight » Sun Feb 23, 2003 1:11 am

As usual, Rusti, another great cliffhanger. Can't wait to see how this one ends.

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Post by Soul Sista » Mon Feb 24, 2003 3:20 pm

You know Rusti,I'm starting to run out of words to describe your work! :lol: I loved this chapter because of all the foreshadowing flashbacks.Examples--- Rusti talking to a "young" Beast in the KI lab,her meeting Kitt and Michael at the lake,Rusti's interaction with her classmate Sandy,her desire to be a Navy SEAL,etc,etc.I like how these events have established Rusti's personality & attitudes towards the people she will soon interact with on a daily basis(I hoped that came out right :? :wink: )The one thing that I hope would happen was for Rusti to pop the taste out of "Mr.LAPD" when they met in the hallway on Skyone(I hope you make my wish come true before you finish this fic :wink: )Bty,I love the new look to your site.Verryy niiccee! 8) Was that one of Enya's song that was used for your background music? If it was, 8) ! You are an superb writer.Keep it up! :)

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Post by rusti_knight » Mon Feb 24, 2003 11:02 pm

That music is Enigma's Sadness. I'm working on getting a better quality wav file to use instead. You may get your wishes yet, SS.

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Post by Soul Sista » Tue Feb 25, 2003 6:27 pm

As Mr.Burns would say......Exxcceellleenntt!!! :twisted:

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Die another day part five

Post by rusti_knight » Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:27 pm

Is up. Do enjoy, and don't forget your feedback!

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Post by Soul Sista » Sat Mar 01, 2003 8:08 pm

"People in Hell need ice water too." :lol: That line just cracked me up when Rusti said that to that moron Cory.I also like the "insider's look" to SEAL training through Rusti's eyes.Keep it coming,girl.This story is getting better and better! :wink:

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Post by Katt » Sat Mar 01, 2003 8:15 pm

I agree with Soul Sista, that chapter was the best yet. I loved the inside look on the seal/BUDs training, and can't wait to see what happens not that the trainer knows she's not a man. I liked that scene with Dante and Rusti where she igniored his screen, then the later scene with Cory, you tell him girl! :lol: Keep up the great work Rusti. :)

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Die Another Day, Part Six

Post by rusti_knight » Sun Mar 23, 2003 12:31 am

Okay, I wasn't going to post it til tomorrow, but I got bored. Do enjoy, and don't forget the feedback.

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