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White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 8:05 am
by Trekie386
Hi board posters! This is my first try at Knight Rider fan fic. Please let me know what you think!
White Bird
If you can't view that, please let me know!
Thanks!
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White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 2:26 pm
by knightshade
It's good. You write well and you've got a very readable style. Working on anything full length? [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 3:04 pm
by knightimmortal
Ok, I have to say... "WOW", that is very emotional, and captures the deep emotions that we never saw in the series. It brought an actual tear to my eye.
You need to keep on writing, this was a great beginning!
knightimmortal
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 3:33 pm
by Trekie386
Thank you for the nice comments! As a matter of fact I am working on a few other fics, got two more, one is almost done.
I'll post the links when they are!
I've always had a deep love for the show. And that last ep of the Stevie Trilogy really got to me. That and the song...
I should have the next one up shortly!
Beth C [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 4:25 pm
by Matthew
That was fantastic. Wow... That really was fantastic. Just like Knightimmortal, it brought a tear to my eye. That was one of the most emmotional fan fics ive ever read. Thank you.
[ October 16, 2002: Message edited by: Matthew ]
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 6:32 pm
by kittgirl
Wonderful, just wonderful! One of the best short fics I've read. Looking forward to the next one!
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 6:50 pm
by knightman
Thanks for the story, nicely done, I think ill get out the tissues now...
funny, everytime i read kr fan fic, and read where kitt is talking i always hear william daniels voice..wierd huh??
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White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:05 pm
by knightimmortal
You're supposed to be able to hear William Daniels' voice in your mind when reading KITT's part, if you don't, then it isn't written right.
knightimmortal
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:25 pm
by Centaurus17
Wow!! Talk about emotional....sniff... [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img] That was unbelievably good. Can't wait for the next one as well.
White Bird Fanfic
Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:28 pm
by Scott Kirkessner
Whoah, that was a good story! Very touching and emotional- nicely done! Bravo and encore!
-Scott
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2003 4:53 am
by WannaBKnight
Beth C,
I know this is old news, but then you know that I haven't been a member long. So then, congratz! Very, VERY, well done. This scene gives the reader/fan as well as Michael closure for the lose of Stevie. This gave us what could not be(or would not be) writen into the story, but should have been. Bravo!
The background music was a perfect "added touch", and I found myself refreshing the page just so I could hear the song while I read the description of KITTs montage.
One word.. Beautifull..