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Post by Trekie386 » Sat Oct 12, 2002 8:05 am

Hi board posters! This is my first try at Knight Rider fan fic. Please let me know what you think!

White Bird

If you can't view that, please let me know!

Thanks!

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Post by knightshade » Sat Oct 12, 2002 2:26 pm

It's good. You write well and you've got a very readable style. Working on anything full length? [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]

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Post by knightimmortal » Sat Oct 12, 2002 3:04 pm

Ok, I have to say... "WOW", that is very emotional, and captures the deep emotions that we never saw in the series. It brought an actual tear to my eye.

You need to keep on writing, this was a great beginning!

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Post by Trekie386 » Sat Oct 12, 2002 3:33 pm

Thank you for the nice comments! As a matter of fact I am working on a few other fics, got two more, one is almost done.

I'll post the links when they are!

I've always had a deep love for the show. And that last ep of the Stevie Trilogy really got to me. That and the song...

I should have the next one up shortly!

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Post by Matthew » Sat Oct 12, 2002 4:25 pm

That was fantastic. Wow... That really was fantastic. Just like Knightimmortal, it brought a tear to my eye. That was one of the most emmotional fan fics ive ever read. Thank you.

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Post by kittgirl » Sat Oct 12, 2002 6:32 pm

Wonderful, just wonderful! One of the best short fics I've read. Looking forward to the next one!

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Post by knightman » Sat Oct 12, 2002 6:50 pm

Thanks for the story, nicely done, I think ill get out the tissues now...

funny, everytime i read kr fan fic, and read where kitt is talking i always hear william daniels voice..wierd huh??
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Post by knightimmortal » Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:05 pm

You're supposed to be able to hear William Daniels' voice in your mind when reading KITT's part, if you don't, then it isn't written right.

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Post by Centaurus17 » Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:25 pm

Wow!! Talk about emotional....sniff... [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img] That was unbelievably good. Can't wait for the next one as well.

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Post by Scott Kirkessner » Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:28 pm

Whoah, that was a good story! Very touching and emotional- nicely done! Bravo and encore!

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Post by WannaBKnight » Mon Jan 13, 2003 4:53 am

Beth C,

I know this is old news, but then you know that I haven't been a member long. So then, congratz! Very, VERY, well done. This scene gives the reader/fan as well as Michael closure for the lose of Stevie. This gave us what could not be(or would not be) writen into the story, but should have been. Bravo!

The background music was a perfect "added touch", and I found myself refreshing the page just so I could hear the song while I read the description of KITTs montage.

One word.. Beautifull..

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