Here's my opinion . . . you're probably not gonna like it!
It was an exciting story, but my enjoyment was spoiled, as there was WAY too
much strong language, too much gratuitous violence with an excessive death
toll. The gratuitously explicit sex scene, in the university halls of residence,
was totally unnecessary. When you consider that Knight Rider was always
meant to be suitable for a family audience, what could've been a decent
fanfic story, IMO it was spoiled with excessive adult content. I know you
provided a warning, but I still think the adult content wasn't necessary.
If you take out all the profanity, extreme violence and sexual content, you
would' have had an excellent follow-up story for the "Knight Rider 2000" TV
movie. Instead, this story was more like Knight Rider meets Reservior Dogs,
with a bit of Die Hard and Terminator thrown in for good measure! Put it on
the big screen, anyone would think that Quentin Tarantino was the director!
Don't get me wrong . . I'm no prude, and I've nothing really against a
good story with a bit of adult content in it, but for heavens sake, that
particular story wouldn't get past the BBFC without an 18 certificate!
Any chance of a cleaned up version, suitable for before the watershed?
(BBFC = British Board of Film Classification -
http://www.bbfc.co.uk/)