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here is a new idea for a return to tv, for Knight Rider

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 3:45 pm

I have been working on a new series, that would bring back David Hasselhoff as Michael Knight. My concept is that FLAG will face a new enemy and be nearly destroyed. Michael will inherit KNIGHT INDUSTRIES and have to rebuild FLAG, and get revenge by recruiting a new driver.

Let me know what you think and maybe how I might contact someone to develop a new series.

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The beginning

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 3:49 pm

Knight Rider! A shadowy flight into the dangerous world of a man, who does not exist: Michael Knight- young loner on a crusade to champion the cause of the innocent, the helpless, the powerless, in a world of criminals who operate above the law.”
Wilton Knight, 1982

“One man can make a difference, Michael.”
Wilton Knight, 1982


“Knight Rider! A shadowy flight into the dangerous world of 2 men, who do not exist: Michael Knight- a mentor and Jason Knight a young loner, both on a crusade to champion the cause of the innocent, the helpless, the powerless, in a world of criminals and terrorist who operate beyond the law.”
Michael Knight, 2006

“I believe that 2 men at this time in history, can make a difference, Jason.”

Michael Knight, 2006

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here we go, the beginning

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 3:52 pm

It’s 2006, 6 years since thews faithful days of early 2000, when the Knight Foundation for Law and Government changed forever. Devon Miles died and Michael Knight returned to continue his self-retirement and life at F.L.A.G. went on under Russel Maddock as full director of operations. Of course crime did not stop and Shawn McCormick took Michaels place as the driver of K.I.T.T., who was in the Knight 4000. Only 2 years in, flaws were d elp with plans to develop the Knight 10000. The 10000 was considered the biggest jump in Knight technology. iscovered in the 4000 and KITT was transferred to a new 2003 red Pontiac Firebird, the Knight 6000. Maddock had run ins with Jennifer Knight, who after Devon was gone, had considered pulling the plug on the FLAG. Maddock convinced her that he could not only save FLAG but also bring Knight Industries back to dominance. With that he hired Lauren Miles, Devon’s niece, to train and to take over FLAG, so he could concentrate on Knight Industries and new technologies. Shawn and Lauren hit it off. In 2005 Maddock hired back Kyle, ex-leader of Team Knight Rider. T.K.R. was disbanded before Maddock had joined FLAG due to budget problems. His responsibilities would be to develop a new team to back up KITT and Shawn. Also in 2005 Tera Larson joined FLAG as new Tech, to help finish the new Knight 8000 and to hAt the beginning of 2006, things were looking good for FLAG and then the Ramseus Syndicate came along. An organization, that was an evil version of FLAG.

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Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 3:56 pm

Coordinating, with the LA FBI, Lauren and Russel worked with director Jack Taylor to bring down Ramseus. Jack sent in one of his best agents, Jason Conners, to work undercover. Jason is a young, talented agent, who was a decorated war hero from Iraq war. He also was engaged to Tracy Daniels. He went in as a computer security expert. The leader of the Syndicate is John Ramseus, a man who is use to getting what he wants, involved in everything from drugs, to weapons smuggling, to stealing corporate secrets, a very rich and determined man. Learning that FLAG had targeted him, he sent in spies to FLAG and learn what he could about their operations. He gets what he needs, along with some interesting info. Knowing that time is not on his side, he launches a deadly strike on FLAG and Knight Industries. At the Foundation mansion, Maddock his in meetings with top Knight scientist and techs, when the mansion explodes, the room he is in, along with the whole front the old mansion is blown off. Lauren and Tera are just coming out of FLAG command when they see 2 military copters firing missiles at mansion. Lauren quickly calls Kyle and orders the new Team Knight Rider vehicles into action, only to watch in horror as 2 are completely destroyed, their drivers killed. Their molecular bonded shells, useless! Knight security forces managed to chase off the attackers, but not with out many losses. Lauren, Kyle and Tera just look at each other as reports come in, Maddock is dead. Early morning in Chicago, 2 Knight board of directors are quickly walking to Knight Plaza, Jennifer Knight has called an emergency meeting, they both wonder what’s happening, when all of sudden, across the street, an explosion comes from Knight Plaza. The same floor as the boardroom, Jennifer Knight is dead along with almost all of the Knight board of directors. News travels fast, back in California, Lauren and rest of FLAG learns of the tragedy in Chicago threw CNN. Quickly Lauren tries to call Shawn, but her and KITT don’t respond. Going down the main road to the Syndicate, a red Firebird flies down the road at 250 mph+. As KITT approaches 3 men jump out in the road, back at the Syndicate, Jason watches in horror as Ramseus sais,”fire”. A moment later the 3 men fire 3 missiles at KITT, the car suddenly stops and explodes. Shawn is killed instantly. Standing there as a conquer, Ramseus is thrilled, nothing can stop him. One of his subordinates alerts him that Michael Knight was still around. Ramseus didn’t know who Michael was but new that no Knight could live to challenge him. He ordered his forces to find him and kill him. Jason not believing what he saw, waited to everyone left, he entered the control room. Taking a disk out of his watch, a watch given to him by Lauren, he puts the disk into the main frame and downloaded everything. All Ramseus plans, operations, and of most importance, what he had just done. Enough evidence to put him away. On his way out of the building, he called Lauren, he informed her about Michael, that he had evidence against Ramsues, he was going to report in, but first pick his fiancée, Tracy. On his way he called his boss, Jack Taylor. He told him he had evidence against Ramseus on a disk in his watch. Jack told him to be safe and Jason told him he be in after he got Tracy. After he hung up, Jack made a phone call.
Lauren was happy that Jason was safe, and she knew, she had to protect Michael at all cost. She ordered Knight Air One to be readied, the rest of Knight security, and the last 2 TKR vehicles sent to protect Michael.
Up in the mountains Michael was at a church, finally getting married. His wife to be was Dr. Maggie Carter, a highly distinguished surgeon, microbiologist, and scientist. A few colleagues of Maggie had come, and few friends of both. As the ceremony continued, suddenly the door flies open, and armed agents stormed in. Michael, looks as a young women flies in and introduces herself as Lauren Miles, of the Knight Foundation for Law and Government. Michael looking stunned sais,”Devon”. She informs him that yes she’s his niece and that Michael is in danger, that he and his bride must come with them now. As they talk, the windows suddenly blow in, and all hell breaks loose. Michael grabs Maggie and yells for everyone to get down. Security forces surround them all the way to Air One. On the way out, Michael sees two Knight vehicles fighting who ever it was, that was trying to kill him. As they board Air One, Michael notices, that no one is flying it. He is introduced to PILOT, Lauren informs Michael, that he is an AI. He begins to wonder where KITT was. Just then he sees one of the Knight vehicles destroyed, as Kyle jumps in and they begin to take off, as he recognizes Kyle, he sees a man standing there with a missile launcher. The man fires, but just before the missile hits, that last Knight vehicle, turbo boost and blocks the missile, destroying the car. The 2nd generation TKR is gone. As they fly away, Lauren fills him in. He learns about Maddock, Jennifer Knight, and he his the sole inheritor of the Knight fortune. He also learns of KITT’s destruction and Shawn’s death. He is in shock, then he asks who is responsible for this. Lauren fills him in. As Jason pulled in Tracy came to the window, she looked terrified, and then Jason saw a man come up behind her. He ran torge the house and then it exploded, tearing into him and killing Tracy. He was blown back 100 ft. and as he laid on the ground, someone approached and took his watch. As they flew back to the Foundation, Lauren informed Michael about Jason’s evidence, he suddenly became concerned, and ordered PILOT to fly to Jason’s home. As they approached they saw an explosion, as they land Michael looks in horror as he sees a man laying on the ground, badly burned, barely alive. Maggie quickly runs to his side, she sais that he needs immediate medical attention. They quickly put him on Air One as fire and rescue personal approach. Michael ordered PILOT to fly to the closest Foundation Medical Center. As they arrive he orders the med. staff to keep it a secret about Jason. Maggie insist on staying to help Jason. Before he leaves he tells her that if she can save him, that she needs to report that he died. She looks at him and sais, “just like you.” He sais yes, he will not be safe, if Ramseus did this, then his life is in danger, Jason Conners must die. He fills the director in, and what must be done. As they leave, Michael feels for the first time to have a purpose, he will get back at Ramseus. Arriving back at the Foundation, he sees the Mansion for the first time, his heart sinks. After landing, they are met by Tera, she informs them that he survived. They quickly rush to FLAG command. Michael walks through the bay where the K-6000 lays in ruins, into the main tech center. There is quit, then suddenly a sound comes from a control panel speaker, Michael is that really you. Michael is so happy to here KITTS voice. They talk, KITT is upset about Shawn, but Michael informs him that they will fight back. Lauren informs Michael that the K-8000 was stolen in all the confusion, but Tera interupts, and tells Michael about the plans for the KNIGHT INDUSTRIES 10000. The only problem is that she is not experienced enough to build it. Many of their techs died in the attack. He grabs a piece of paper and writes down 2 names for Lauren and Kyle to locate and get there. He tells Tera to get started. As he heads out, he tells Lauren that he’s taking AIR ONE and going to Berkley to hopefully get help. She tells him that building the K-10000 could be a waste of time, because of the defect in the bonded shell in the cars. Even AIR ONE is not safe. He tells her they will figure it out, to have faith, her uncle would, he smiles and heads out. End first half….

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what do you think so far

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 4:22 pm

That was the 1st part of the premier of a series I am hoping to develop. Now I am not a writer, so I apoligize if this looks rough, but I love the origanal series, so so about Knight 2000 movie and I liked the idea for Team Knight Rider. My new series would be called Knight Rider Legacy. Now I have heard this term Legacy before on this site, so hopefully I dont upset anyone with using it. But I felt it worked for this, because of how I was going about it. Doing a movie or tv series without David as MIchael Knight, just doesnt work for me. At same time, having David as the hero didnt work for me. It seemed to have him be a mentor, and to lead Knight Industries and FLAG worked better. As you read my story, I hope you agree.
Now alittle charactor background to a new cast.
Basically everyone introduced in the KNIGHT 2000 movie, I would kill off.
Starting a new beginning.
Some new charactors would be and who I would pick to play those parts
Lauren Miles, played by Emily Mortimer, niece to Devon Miles, new director
Tera Larson, played by Tembi Locke, new tech to KITT
Dr. Maggie Carter Knight, played by Linda Fiorentino, new wife to MIchael Knight, also will become director of FLAG Medical and Research.

Jason KNIGHT, played Cameron Mathison, the next driver of KITT, once was Jason Conners, FBI agent

The new KITT, stilled voiced by William Daniels, will be the KNIGHT 10000
a 2005 BLACK Mustang, all new- offensive SMART weapons, new heads up tactical screen, improved manuverabilty, extreme super pursuit mode, improved turbo boost, new stun weapons and more. Oh yah, a new NANO molecular bonded shell that in future episodes will allow KITT to change colors or even disappear.

This is just some of the new devopments and new ideas I have.

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Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 4:34 pm

The next part is the 2nd part, enjoy[/url]

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2nd part

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 4:40 pm

On his way to Berkley, Micheal talks to PILOT about how long he has been online. PILOT tells him only 6 months. He was a proto-type to a future Knight strike Helicopter. Michael asked if he was armed, PILOT said no, he was only for transport only, but he had hopes of being the main frame to the next generation Strike version. Michael was wondering what Maddock was developing in that next generation of Knight vehicles, in particular the K-10000. PILOT informed him that they were on approach to Berkley. As Bonnie Barstow was teaching her class, she saw the black helicopter landing through the window. She saw the Knight markings and wondered who from the Foundation could be landing. Never in thousand years would she guess Michael Knight. She had left the Foundation after Michael left, she was still mad at how he left her and Devon high and dry. She dismissed her class and went out to meet Michael. Still a little surprised at seeing Michael exit from a Knight vehicle, she just looked at him. Michael told her hello, told her she looked great and asked for her help. She lit into him about the past, he told her he understood, but Devon had forgiven him, he said and maybe she might be able too. Bonnie looked out at the sunset, and Michael put his arm around her and told her he missed Devon also. He proceeded to fill her in on what had happen over the last few days. She had been so busy, that she not heard about Chicago. Bonnie told Michael that Maddock had tried to get her to come back 6 months ago, but she refused him. Michael told her that KITT needed her, he needed her. As Michael opened the door to AIR ONE, Bonnie gave him a hug and told him it was good to see him again. After entering, she looked for a pilot, she didn’t seem shocked to find an AI piloting. Michael introduced her to PILOT and they took off for the Foundation. Upon arrival, Michael and Bonnie were greeted by April and RC3, they all hugged. Bonnie seemed surprised to see them, Michael just said that he had forgotten to inform her that he had got some more help. Lauren said that they were going to need all the help they could get. Michael introduced her and Tera to his former colleagues. They walked into the main lab and KITT was very excited to see them. After talking with KITT, Bonnie said they should get started at once. Tera took everyone into the main tech area, where the frame of the K-10000 rested. Bonnie was impressed by the equipment and set up of the facility, while April and RC3 also looked impressed. On screens around the tech area the designs and info about the K-10000 flashed on the screens. The KNIGHT 10000, would be the first Knight vehicle with offensive weapons capabilities, ground to air smart missiles, surface to surface smart missiles, smart mortar launchers, machine guns and regular guns with smart bullets. Michael asked what would make them so smart? Lauren informed him and everyone else that the main AI of the vehicle would, in this case, KITT. April said she wasn’t sure about building such a weapons system. Tera told her that the offensive systems would only be a last resort or if necessary to take on someone who mighty use such weapons against the 10000 first. Otherwise the 10000 would have other options. It would have everything the 2000, 4000, 6000 all had like the stun weapons, the tire imploders, extreme maneuverability, etc. The 10000 would have advance, extreme super pursuit speeds, a new tactical overhead display, the ability to tap into any phone or computer lines and much more. The only issue was the Molecular Bonded Shell, which had no replacement. RC3 said he might have a solution. His company was developing a NANO MOLECULAR BONDED SHELL and he was willing to sell it to FLAG if they thought they would be able to finish developing it. April asked what it did. RC3 informed the group that his company had developed special nanites that made repairs at the cellular level. Bonnie and April agreed they would look at it, it could solve their biggest problem. Lauren seemed very happy. Michael said that all he cared about was that new car be black in color. Everyone laughed. And then everyone was silent, Bonnie asked who was going to be the driver, looking at little concerned at Michael. Everyone looking at Michael, he said he had a new driver in mind. Later that day Michael showed up at FLAG MED. Center with Lauren, Maggie greeted them. She seemed very happy, things were going very well. The only issue was Jason had lost his short-term memory, apparently he had hit his head when he was thrown back. He didn’t remember Tracy dying, and the experts felt he should remember on his own. Michael understood, he stayed out with Maggie while Lauren went into see Jason. Michael asked Maggie how she felt, she said she was fine. Maggie asked how he was, he told her what he had done the last few days, they were working on a new car for KITT and he needed Jason. She reminded him, that he, Michael had been bitter torge FLAG, about the way he was recruited and now he was repeating the same act. He told her he might had been wrong, maybe 1 man could make a difference, if he had help from another. Maggie asked him if he was going to return to FLAG. Michael informed her, he owned FLAG, and the entire KNIGHT fortune. Right now, he had to revenge his friends, and take down RAMSEUS. She said she would stand with him whatever he decided. Before going in he told her, when this over, we will get married. They kiss. Entering the room, Michael saw a young man all rapped up. Michael said hi to Jason and introduced himself. Jason said thank you for saving my life, Maggie had told him everything about him, including the fact that Michael was once an operative of FLAG. Jason asked when he was going to be able to get back at those who did this. Michael asked everyone to leave the room, and then he told Jason a story about one man and a super car that had once made a difference. (Flashes of the Knight 2000 in action and Michael as young man) Jason asked if Michael was offering him a job, Michael said yes. But first he needed to get better, and to begin training. After leaving the room, he told Maggie that he wanted Jason transferred to the Knight Mansion. As they left, Lauren seemed concerned, the Mansion was under repair and at risk to another attack. Michael told her that Ramseus felt that they were defeated. Back at the mansion Michael introduced Maggie to Bonnie, April, and RC3. Bonnie seemed surprised that he was getting married.
A month goes by, everyone is busy, the 10000 is about ready, Jason was almost ready to have the wraps removed and begin his physical training, and Michael had pulled the FMU(Flag mobile unit) out of moth balls. RC3 put a team from his company on it to refurbish it. Michael was amazed at what everyone had done over the past 15-20 years. RC3 had started his own technology company with Jennifer and Devin’s help, April had gotten married and had twins, 2 girls, and Bonnie had became the Dean at Berkley. Where he had begun and failed at his fishing boat, just seem to not accomplish much. But now, he was getting married and Wilton Knight had had left Knight Industries in his hands. How could he had known, nearly 25 years since his death, Michael would have to continue the Knight Legacy. Later that day, everyone was in Jason’s room, the wraps were coming off. As everyone watched, Maggie removed them and a handsome young man appeared. Maggie handed him a mirror, Jason looked surprised. Knowing how Jason felt, Michael stepped forward. Jason looked at him and said this is not me. Michael told him that he understood and he had felt the same way and it would take him awhile to get use to it. Michael told him that he had once been a detective for LA, his name was Michael Long. For your safety and anyone you care about, Jason Conners is dead. Then who am I, he asks Michael? Your Jason Knight. Jason sat there for a minute and then smiled, I am really cute. All the women in the room agreed. The next day Jason began his final workouts. He was running when he saw everyone heading for the auto bays, the KNIGHT 10000 was ready.
Entering the bay he saw a 2005 Black Ford Mustang sitting in the center, a red scanner in front began to flash back and forth, and on the side where the GT logos would be, the knight logo existed. The california license plates read KNIGHT. Michael waved to Jason to get in and just before he gets in, Michael says wait, you drive. Bonnie and April look concerned, and Michael says don’t worry, KITT wont let him hit anything. They all laugh and Jason says “KITT?” They pull out of the garage and Michael tells him to pull over. He then tells KITT to introduce himself. KITT does and at first Jason looks surprised, been then understands. He asks if Shawn’s car had an AI and KITT answers yes, him. Jason tells Michael that he studied all the specs on “KITT”, but he didn’t realize that KITT was vocal. Michael told him he would get use to it. This is my car, he asks. KITT tells him that he is his own car, they were partners. Being a little concerned, Jason asks about KITTS defensive shield, what will keep him from being blown up. KITT informs him that he has a new NANO MOLECULAR BONDED SHELL that hopefully will give them the edge. Michael just smiles. Then their off for their 1st drive. Jason tells Michael he loves this. KITT says thank you.
Back at Ramseus command, John prepares to send stolen military system to terrorist across the world. A Russian agent waits for his payment for delivery of two nuclear suitcases. John seems very excited, when one of his henchmen come and informs him that FLAG may be regrouping. He gets angry and tells him to send in team to shut them down. That night Jason is out running in the garden when 5 men attempt to jump him. KITT is in the bay detects the intrusion and turbos through the doors out into the foundation yard. Alarms go off, knight security forces jump into action and Michael, who is with Maggie, runs outside. Out in the garden, Jason is holding his own, when a black mustang jumps through the air. As KITT lands he begins to stun the guys attacking Jason and as 2 of the guys attempt to escape his doors open and both fly over the doors. The leader of the group begins to fire his gun at KITT, but KITT backs him up to a wall and begins to spin his tires, while remaining stationary. His front bumper is at the guy’s kneecaps and he looks very scared. As Jason lies on the ground, watching, Michael runs up with Knight Security, and orders KITT to stop, but KITT doesn’t. Just as it looks like KITT is going to go through the wall and kill the guy, he shuts down. Security grabs the guy along with the others. Michael asks KITT what happened as he helps Jason up. KITT tells him that he will not loose another driver again, this worries Michael. Jason tells him that he is ok and that he’ll return KITT to the Bay. Michael goes to interrogate the intruders.

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cast

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 4:51 pm

Staring David Hasselhoff as Michael Knight
Cameron Matheson as Jason Knight
William Daniels as voice of KITT

Co-staring Linda Fiorentino as Dr. Maggie Carter Knight
Emily Mortimer as Lauren Miles
Tembi Locke as Tera Larson

Guest stars Patricia McPherson as Bonnie
Rebecca Holden as April
Peter Parros as “RC3” Reginald
Brixton Karnes as Kyle, former TKR team leader
Piper Perabo as Tracy Daniels, Jasons fiancee
Michael Weatherly as Jason Conners, Jason past life
Gary Sinise as Jack Taylor, F.B.I., LA director
John Glover as John Ramseus, leader of the Syndicate
Kristine Sutherland as Julie Christopherson

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do you want the ending?

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 5:01 pm

well you will have to wait, let me know what you think.
Leave message here or at cjcraig@yahoo.com

oh yeah, I also have Ideas for the rest of the series, about 3 years and then how I would take Legacy to the big screen.
Also I have ideas for 2 spin-offs that we could do.

Any ideas how I might get my idea to the right people, or if you are reading this and you are the right people and like my ideas, let me know.

I will post the ending in a few days.

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Postby FuzzieDice » Mon Nov 01, 2004 7:37 pm

Cool ideas. Nice story too. I hope your future ideas would include KARR.
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hey I like your ideas about KARR

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 8:07 pm

Actually in my version, as you see in the final part of the story, John Ramseus will be defeated in the openner, but in the season finale, John Ramseus continues his fathers work and brings back the Syndicate.
As for KARR, I have ideas how to bring him back. In my story, and its only mentioned once, the proto-type Knight 8000 is missing after the initial attack. Before the Syndicate, 2 years after the Knight 4000 was introduced, flaws were found in the car, so KITT was moved to the new K-6000, a red 2002 Pontiac Firebird. The Knight 8000 is a black 2003 Firebird, but it lacked the new state of the art weapons, which Maddock felt KITT needed to fight in post 911 world. Thats why the Knight 6000 and the 4 proto type Team Rider vehicles were destroyed, they were unable to fight back only try to defend with bonded shells that were useless because of the Syndicates spies.
So I do plan to reintroduce KARR, and maybe even through the Syndicate.
Though it will be discovered the Ramseus Syndicate is actually funded by an even more powerful former enemy's son, Alexander Knight!
I dont want to say to much, but KITT and Jason may have to face GOLIATH down the road.
My series will have lots of action, suspense, special effects, stunts and of coarse lots of personal drama. Also, some great fun.
Thanks for your imput.

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here's the ending, a little early, enjoy

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 8:13 pm

As Jason entered KITT, he a flash back to the night he left the RAMSEUS compound, the night his life changed. He remembered the evidence he collected, the watch Lauren had given him, and his beautiful fiancée who had died in the explosion at his house. He remembered everything! KITT told him he was sorry he almost killed that man, but he couldn’t loose anyone like he lost Shawn, again. Jason told him that he understood and then he explained how he just remembered everything. He asked KITT why Michael and Maggie hadn’t told him. KITT told him that maybe they felt he needed to remember himself. Jason thought about that, and then he told KITT that they needed to make Ramseus pay. KITT asked how? Michael and Kyle came out of the interrogation room, and Lauren asked if they found anything out. Kyle said they’re definitely with RAMSEUS, but that’s all they would confirm. Michael looked very upset. He looked at Bonnie, “KITT could have killed that guy.” Bonnie told him that KITT is still dealing with Shawn’s death.
He is more human, than you know. April said that they might be able to remove KITT’S final memory of Shawn, seeing her die. As they all talked, Tera runs in, Jason never brought KITT back to the bay. Going down the freeway, KITT tells Jason that RAMSEUS has a warehouse by the docks. Jason tells him that he remembers the faculty from when he was downloading the Syndicates main frame. Destroying the warehouse would not destroy the Syndicate, but it would send a message. As they approach KITT’S sensors show 5 workers inside. Jason tells him that they need to get them out, they needed a distraction. KITT told him to watch the master. Using his speakers he creates sirens and load voices. He transmits into the building that that everyone was surrounded, that to come out with hands up. Inside the 5 guys looked really scared and decide to give up. As they came out all they saw was a black mustang with a flashing red light in front. Suddenly they were on the ground, unconscious. Jason was impressed. He activated KITT’S tactical systems, weapons systems armed. Jumping to a high rate of speed, KITT crashed through the front gate. Jason instructed KITT to do a full scan on everything in the warehouse. KITT told him there was 2 billion dollars of drugs and illegal weapons through out the warehouse. Jason smiled and let loose with grenades and mortars, blowing up everything in sight. As the warehouse began to collapse, KITT jumped through the side of the burning building and sped away. Back at the Foundation, Michael was wondering where KITT and Jason were, when he got a call from Director Jack Taylor. Jack told him that one of RAMSEUS warehouses just went up in flames and witnesses at the scene reported a black mustang with California plates with the word KNIGHT, leaving the area. Michael turned CNN on and told Taylor he would look into it. Watching a warehouse burning on TV, Michael wondering what was going on. At the RAMSEUS compound, John Ramseus was just being informed about what had happen. First, he was unusually quit, then he screamed at his men, how did this happen. One of his people said that it appeared to be FLAG. Seeing a tape from on of the video cameras before it was destroyed, he saw a black mustang blowing everything up. He turned to his people and told them to find that car and destroy it. Back at FLAG, Jason finally called in, he informed Michael that he had all his memories back, and wondered why he didn’t tell him about Tracy. Maggie stepped forward and told Jason that Michael was following her medical orders. After some silence, Michael asked Jason what he remembered and Jason told him that he remembered enough to bring Ramseus down. He hit a button transmitting KITT’S scans from inside the warehouse, and as quick as they came in, Lauren Miles started analyzing all the data. She said we need to contact Jack Taylor and Jason told them no. Jason explained why he thought Taylor was working with Ramseus, that we needed to contact someone outside California. He asked Lauren if she remembered the watch she gave him when he was Jason Conners. She said yes, but thought it was destroyed in the blast. Jason told her no, he remember someone taking it from him after the blast, just before he past out. Michael said it probably one of Ramseus guys. Jason told him it wasn’t, it was an agent, and he had seen him before getting off the elevator at FBI headquarters in LA. Jack Taylor was the only one who new he was heading home, besides Lauren. Michael asked what Jason planned. Jason said he was going see Jack. Right now he has no clue that they were on to him. Using KITT’S scanners he would find the watch. Bonnie told Jason to look in the center council of KITT, where a watch communicator was. Jason put the watch on. Tera told him that he would be able to stay in contact with KITT, plus KITT’S scanners would be enhanced through the watch. Jason was impressed. Michael told him that he would contact an old friend who was Director FBI southeast sector. Jason smiled and asked “Julie Christopherson, an old girlfriend huh?” Michael laughed and looked at Maggie, and got serious and just said yeah, be careful. Jason told them that if they had that FLAG mobile unit done, they might want to evacuate F LAG command. Michael told him good luck. Then he turned and asked Kyle if it was ready, and Kyle said oh yah.

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here is the rest of the final part

Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 01, 2004 8:17 pm

As KITT pulled up, he explained to KITT to keep an eye on Taylor, if he makes a call, tap it. KITT told Jason that he was the rookie and that his 20+ years made him the vet. Jason laughed and said ok old man. Jason entered the FBI headquarters and asked to see Jack Taylor, that he had evidence for him about RAMSEUS. As Jason head up the elevator, Jack was informed about Jason. He became quite concerned, as Jason entered he handed Jack a disc with info about RAMSEUS warehouse. So you are the new KNIGHT operative. He informed Jason that he should arrest him for destroying the warehouse. Jason looked at him and said only if you want to help John Ramseus. Once again Jack got nervous, Jason was having fun. Jack excused himself and left the room. Jason called KITT and told him to keep an eye on Jack, KITT informed him that Jack was definitely involved. KITT explained how he could tell, while he scanned for the watch. KITT then informed him that Jack was calling someone, he was calling John Ramseus. Jason told him to record it. At the same time he found the safe, and he asked KITT to help. KITT sent a signal to open it. Inside was the watch and the disk was inside it. All of sudden an alarm went off. Jason ran out the door and down the stairs. He was forced out of the stairwell on the 3rd floor. He fought with 3 guys, he managed knock out 2 of them and throw 1 down the stairs. He yelled into the intercom for help from KITT. He informed him that several agents were heading his way and the only way out was, out the window. Jason told KITT that wasn’t funny, how was he going to break the glass. KITT told him that to break it somehow. Jason threw a chair at the window, but it did nothing. He looked at the window, thinking, then went and grabbed one of the agents hand gun and shot the window out. While Jason tried to figure out how to get out, KITT had maneuvered below the window and opened the roof of the car. Jason looked down and KITT with the roof open. Jason spoke into his intercom and told KITT that he didn’t think he could jump, KITT informed him that 10 agents were about to enter the room. Jason jumped landing in KITT’S driver seat. Jack Taylor stood at the window as KITT pulled away, and then Jack saw a military helicopter fire a missile at him and the building. All of sudden there was explosion behind KITT at the FBI headquarters. Jason spun KITT around to see what happened. KITT informed him that a military helicopter had fired a missile of some kind into the building, Jack Taylor was dead. Jason and KITT quickly went after the copter. As they went to into battle mode, Michael called from the FMU to see what was going on. Jason told him Ramseus had tried to kill him and Jack, after Jack had called him, by using one of his strike helicopters and firing a missile into the FBI killing a lot of innocent people.. Michael informed Jason that Julie was sending a team to take over the FBI office. Jason said that was good, he put the disk into KITT’S CPU and transmitted all the data plus KITT’S scans to the FMU. He told Michael that should be all the evidence he needs to move against RAMSEUS. Lauren asked what he was planning. Jason told her that he and KITT were going to take down that copter. Bonnie told Michael that the new nano molecular bonded shell hasn’t been tested, and Jason told her it was about to get tested. The strike copter had position itself it front of KITT. Michael asked where KITT was, the FMU told him down below them. He ordered the FMU stopped, everyone ran out the back of the semi and looked down off the bridge. What they saw horrified Bonnie, April and especially Tera. The strike copter fired 3 missiles at KITT. Unable to move in time KITT took all 3 shots. After the dust cleared, everyone saw that KITT had not only survived but had activated his ground to air missiles and fired. The copter fell from the sky, fully intact, but the blades and tail were blown off. RC3 looked proud and Director Christopherson couldn’t believe what she saw. As the pilot and co-pilot attempted to escape, KITT stunned them. Jason jumped out of KITT and ran to them. The FMU arrived shortly after that, along with several FBI agents. Michael jumped out of the FMU and told Jason it was ok, they’re with us. The FBI took RAMSEUS men into custody. Michael introduced Jason to Director Christopherson. Jason told Michael that they needed to take Ramseus down immediately before he had the chance to ship out any of his weapons or drugs. Michael told Jason that they would coordinate with the FBI. Julie asked what Jason had in mind. Jason told everyone he was the only one to know the inside of the Syndicates compound. Julie asked Michael how he would know, Michael told her would explain later. Michael told him that would be dangerous, and Jason told him, we need to know what Ramseus was up too. Tera came up to Jason and told him that if he was going in, he needed to have this, she took out a needle and injected a chip into Jason’s neck. She told him that it would allow KITT to track him, also he could communicate with KITT threw it. Jason looked at her, and then said KITT. KITT said yes, but only Jason heard him. He gave Tera a smile. Michael told Jason that they would wait to hear from him. As they headed for the Syndicates compound Jason told KITT that it had been a pleasure working with him. KITT asked if he was going somewhere. Jason told him he hoped not. While arriving outside, Jason told KITT that they wont let him just walk in. KITT suggested that he might be able to enter above. Jason asked him how? KITT opened the roof and told Jason to stand on the driver seat. Then he told him, good luck, and ejected Jason up to the balcony on the 8th floor. Jason communicated to KITT, “that was great!” As Jason entered he was surprised at first that no one was around. He went out into the compound. Out in the hall he saw 2 guards guarding a room, so he wandered down the hall and said hi to the guards and then hit one guy on the right, the 2nd guy hit him and Jason then kicked him in the head and knocked him out. The 1st guy got up but Jason just slammed him into the wall. Jason entered the room and found plans on a table, plans to ship weapons to terrorist groups around the world. Enough to tip the balance in the Middle East to the terrorist. KITT then told him to hide but it was to late, 10 men entered along with John Ramseus. So your Jason Knight, John said to Jason, he was very impressed. He asked Jason when the FBI and FLAG were going to strike. Laughing he told Jason never, and he told that he had 2 suit case Nuclear bombs, one with him and one at his penthouse, downtown LA. If they interfere with him he will blow them both up. That includes the coast guard messing with his 2 freighters. Jason just simply said, “KITT you know what to do.” And KITT did, he transmitted Jason and Johns conversation to the FMU. Michael looked at Julie, and she gave orders for a bomb squad to head to Ramseus’s penthouse. She told Michael that she would contact the coast guard to back them off. Michael told Maggie she may want to get to safety. She told him, she was safe with him. Back at the compound, Ramseus told Jason good bye, and told his men to take him down to the parking garage, kill him. Jason told him that he had already been dead before and that he would be back. John just laughed. The men took him down the elevator to the parking garage. As they were about to shoot, KITT came blasting through the wall, and quickly stunned them all. Jason jumped in and asked what took him so long, and then laughed. On the roof, Ramseus entered a helicopter and it took off. As KITT pulled out of the garage, Jason called Michael and told him that Ramseus had escaped in a helicopter, they were going after him. Julie told him to back off, that the FBI would stop him. Jason reminded her that if he sees anyone he blow up his bombs. At the penthouse, the agent in charge called and said they would not be able to disarm the bomb. Julie told Michael that those ships could not be allowed to leave American waters. Michael told her then, let Jason do his job. Lauren called Jason told him not to fail. Jason asked KITT if he had Ramseus located, KITT said yes, but he’s flying really low. Jason said he’s trying to fly low to avoid rader. He asked KITT if he could project Ramseus likeest coarse. KITT said not a problem. Jason saw a parking structure, that’s it. He hit extreme pursuit mode, and KITT went from about 70 mph to 350 mph. We need to get in front of them he explained to KITT. KITT said we can’t micro-jam him, or even shoot him down, he might have time to set off the bombs. Jason agreed with KITT, and KITT wondered how he planned to stop him. As they slowed to enter the parking structure, Jason told KITT that they were going to through him. KITT was silent for a moment, then he told Jason that he was spending too much time with Michael, and Jason said, I’ll take that as a complement. As they reached the roof of the parking structure, KITT said here he comes, Ramseus looked to his left and saw KITT, Jason hit the turbo boost and they jumped right into the helicopter, passing right through. They landed on the roof of the other building. John Ramseus helicopter crashed to the ground below, he was dead. The FBI and Knight security move in quickly and secured the remote for the bombs. The coast guard moved in to secure the ships. It was all over. Sitting hi above, on the roof of a 10 story building, Jason asked KITT if he could fly.
Back at the Foundation a few days later, Michael and Maggie were in the Knight garden with many of their friends, tying the knot finally. Jason was there as Michael’s best man and Bonnie was Maggie’s maid of honor. ALL were happy. Later there was a party, Michael thanked his friends, RC3, APRIL, and BONNIE for helping bring back one man’s dream. As RC3 and April left to return to their lives, Bonnie told Tera, if she ever needed help in the future don’t be afraid to call, and she made sure Michael overheard her. He just smiled as she left to join RC3 and April in saying bye to KITT. Michael walked over to Lauren and Kyle. Lauren had offered Kyle a permanent position as head of KNIGHT security. Michael also said that he needed a good man to help build a new Team KNIGHT Rider. Kyle said he liked Team KNIGHT Force. Michael said that sounded good to him and then asked if Kyle would excuse Lauren Miles, for a second. He said sure seeing Maggie all alone. He went over to ask the bride for a dance. Michael walked with Lauren out on the balcony. He told Lauren he was very happy with her, that her uncle would be proud and hoped she would take full control of FLAG. Lauren was concerned that Michael was going to leave again. He told her no, this where he belongs, but he needed to rebuild KNIGHT INDUSTRIES, and he needed her help. She said no problem.
He walked over to where Kyle and Maggie were dancing, and asked if he could cut in, Kyle said of coarse.
He asked Maggie if she was happy, she said yes, he told her he needed her support and she said she would be there for him always. Michael looked at her and said you want to be in charge of Foundation medical and research operations don’t you? She said of coarse. The next morning, Jason was preparing to head out with KITT, when Lauren told him that Michael needed to see him in his office in the mansion. As Jason entered he saw contractors finishing up. Michael asked if they give him a few minutes alone with Jason. Michael asked if he liked the office. Jason said the mansion was very cool, he was glad that they were able to restore it. Michael told him this office once belong to his friend Devon Miles and before that, the office and whole house belonged to a man named Wilton Knight. Wilton believed that one man could make a difference. He asked if Jason believed that. Jason said he guessed. Michael said he didn’t and that’s why he had left. Jason looked confused and then Michael said, “ I believe that 2 men, at this time in history, can make a difference, you and I Jason.” Then he put his hand out to Jason and he took it and smiled. As they walked out to KITT, Jason asked Michael where he and Maggie were going to honeymoon. Michael told him they were heading to Chicago, to rebuild the KNIGHT board of directors. As they got to the black mustang, the KNIGHT 10000, KITT for short, Lauren met them. Michael asked if the 2 of them were going to be able to work together, they both smiled and said yes. Just then Tera climbed out of KITT and asked what about her, KITT responded don’t worry, just keep me tuned up and everything will be fine. They all laughed. As Jason climbed into KITT, Maggie walked up and put her arm around her husband. Jason put KITT into gear and they were off as Michael and the others all waved.

The Legacy continues……..

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thats the whole story

Postby knightphoenix » Tue Nov 02, 2004 10:12 am

well thats all of the story, I wish I could post pictures of the new KITT and cast. For some reason it wont let me. Oh well enjoy and let me know what you think.

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Postby Lost Knight » Tue Nov 02, 2004 10:29 am

I think you would have been better off simply posting a link to your story. It looks like an overwhelming amount of text, but I will read through it when I'm not at work at let you know what I think.
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Postby knightphoenix » Wed Nov 03, 2004 11:41 am

I hope you get a chance to read it, Lost Knight. Sorry about it being so long, I didnt know how to create a link to my story. Maybe can explain to me how I can do that in the future. I am going to start working on a nother episode that woud be the season finale for the first season, leading to introducing Alexander Knight, Garth's son, and possibly bringing KARR back then.

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Postby knightdriver » Wed Nov 03, 2004 11:50 am

I started to read it but kept loosing my place. Got bugg eyed due to all
that text. Maybe you should have put in some paragraphs and spaces
between the paragraphs to help break it up a bit. :?

Gotta go rest my eyes. Eyedrops anyone. I feel sleepy. :wink:
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Postby knightphoenix » Wed Nov 03, 2004 11:59 am

sorry Knight Driver, Like I said I am not much of a writer, I just wanted to put my idea down, to see what others thought of it.

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Postby knightdriver » Wed Nov 03, 2004 12:45 pm

No need to be sorry. 8)

Maybe you can go back and edit them a bit. Just ad a few spaces or
paragaphs between a few spots to break it up a bit. That would make it
much easier to read through. Shouldn't take but a minute or two to
scroll down and space it up a bit. Sounded interesting from what I
got through.
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Postby knightphoenix » Mon Nov 15, 2004 3:22 pm

check out my new website I am building for my future series, I hope.

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