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Post by K.I.A.N » Thu Aug 26, 2004 9:32 pm

I can't post this in the fan fic area can someone help with that anyway this is my first story so go easy on me ok.

Until The End
By K.I.A.N

*************************************************************
Chapter 1
Things Start To Happen

"Anything But Ordinary"

By avril lavigne

Sometimes I get so weird

I even freak myself out

I laugh myself to sleep

It's my lullaby

Sometimes I drive so fast

Just to feel the danger

I wanna scream

It makes me feel alive

Is it enough to love?

Is it enough to breath?

Somebody rip my heart out

And leave me here to bleed

Is it enough to die?

Somebody save my life

I'd rather be anything but ordinary please

To walk within the lines

Would make my life so boring

I want to know that I

Have been to the extreme

So knock me off my feet

Come on now give it to me

Anything to make me feel alive

Is it enough to love?

Is it enough to breath?

Somebody rip my heart out

And leave me here to bleed

Is it enough to die?

Somebody save my life

I'd rather be anything but ordinary please

I'd rahter be anything but ordinary please.

Let down your defences

Use no common sense

If you look you will see

that this world is a beautiful

accident turbulent suculent

opulent permanent, no way

I wanna taste it

Don't wanna waste it away

Sometimes I get so weird

I even freak myself out

I laugh my self to sleep

It's my lullaby

Is it enough?

Is it enough?

Is it enough to breath?

Somebody rip my heart out

And leave me here to bleed

Is it enough to die?

Somebody save my life

I'd rather be anything but ordinary please

Is it enough?

Is it enough to die?

Somebody save my life

I'd rather be anything but ordinary please

I'd rather be anything but ordinary please.


Chapter 1

Things Start To Happen

Its a great day at the FLAG. The sun is shinning and there is not a cloud in the sky. We see michael knight walking outside he makes his way to the black car he has known for many years to anyone else it was an ordinary car but little did anyone know this car is anything but ordinary. michael walks up to the black car and trys to open the car door but nothing happens he trys again but still no luck.

Michael: KITT...... KITT..... come on KITT

The car then talks up this may have scared just about anyone but not michael.

KITT: michael devon has been wanting to talk to you. you know that.

Michael: yeah I said I would talk to him today not this morning.

KITT: its almost two thirty. You can't consider it still morning

Michael just rased his hands and spoke

Michael: Fine you want me to see devon I will.

Michael knew KITT wouldn't let him in the car until he spoke with devon so he simply turned around and went to find devon know KITT would be waching him and make him do it.

Michael: hey devon

Devon: michael I never thought you would come to talk to me

Michael: nether did I

Devon: I got good news. you may want to sit down

michael instantly sat down when ever devon has good new it usually is bad for KITT and him.

Michael: well whats the good news

Devon: Well you see after your last case

Michael: yeah yeah I know..... the one messed up on

Devon: well jennifer knight has it into a consider. She said that you and KITT are in need of a new partner so she wants to reactivate the Knights Industries Auto Navigator or KIAN for short

Michael: what another KARR just what we need it will run me over in two seconds flat

Devon: it a she.

Michael: what ever. I dought she has the preserve human life program.

Devon: she does not have the preserve human life program but even if she try's anything funny every thing about her is weaker then KITT she does not have SPM and her MBS is weaker then KITTs. KITT could top her speed in a mater of seconds. You have to get along because jennifer wants this.

Michael: alright then give me all the info on KIAN.

Devon: KIAN was a simple car the first try at making an A.I. with emotions also the first to learn like a human. But there was a glich a bad one the emotion program went out of control we feared that KIAN would go out of her mind. We put in a block that stoped the emotion problem. but wilton knight proclaimed her failed and had her deactivated her.

michael: then KITT and I are going to have to work with an over emotion car.

devon: but she could be of great use to you and KITT

Michael: Alright alright I'll tell KITT the news and when is KIAN going to be joining the team.

Devon: two or three days

michael then left devon with his paperwork and made his way to KITT again.

Michael: Well KITT I got some news for you

KITT: I know michael I was lising to you and devon! KIAN.... sounds good to me. michael you don't sound happy about this.

Michael: I don't know I got a bad feeling this isn't going to work out good.


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Post by K.I.A.N » Fri Aug 27, 2004 3:04 pm

what no replies :P well here is chapter two hopefully this one will get some replies. CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME I WOULD LIKE TO PUT THIS IN THE FAN FIC FORUM.

Chapter: 2
Not As Good As It Seems

Three days had passed KITT had asked bonnie at least a hundred times if they were ready to activate KIAN. on the other hand michael wasn't very thrilled to know a new partner was needed. He didn't tell KITT that he was not happy. He simply just said he didn't have a good feeling about this. Michael had just come back from a hard case he had almost been shot. He just wanted a good nap and something to eat. He parked KITT and was just about to go to take a rest when bonnie came to him with a smile

Michael: its time isn't it.

she nodded in agrement

Bonnie: I'll be in the gerage with devon and RC hurry and get KITT.

Michael: yeah he will most likely tubo boost for joy.

Michael made his way to KITT. He tired to sound happy about this but failed miserably

Michael: KITT

The scanner completely flashed on and then made the normal sweep with the normal wooshing noise

KITT: yes michael

Michael: its time

KITT practically went into SPM and drove off

KITT: hurry michael

michael was forced to chase after KITT

Michael: hey KITT slow down

in the garage bonnie is working on a pink car. RC on the other hand was just looking at it

RC: well you know pink isn't a color you find on cars.

Bonnie: Well unless you want to pant her a different color I would not complain

RC: its a she

Bonnie: Pink RC pink.

Devon: how much longer bonnie

Bonnie: Once michael and KITT get here I will be ready

Michael: I am here

Devon: good now lets see what happens.

michael opens the garage so KITT can get in.

Bonnie: alright guys

KIAN's scanner comes to life and slowly tracks back and forth

KIAN: KARR?

KITT: No im KITT not KARR

KIAN: I....I...was deactivated because I was a error....a flaw....a waste of wilton's hard work. I have been reactivated for no point of reason......I WILL NOT BE DEACTIVATED AGAIN!

Her engine roared to life she began to push KITT out of the way and speeded away.

Michael: yep another KARR.

Devon: This is not good KIAN could hurt or even kill someone. this reacton was not planed.

Michael: don't worry devon I won't let her get away.

KITT: You mean we won't let her get away.



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Post by K.I.A.N » Fri Aug 27, 2004 4:37 pm

this chapter and the next few chapters may be shorter then normal


Gravity Of Love
by enigma

Turn around and smell what you don't see
Close your eyes ... it is so clear
Here's the mirror, behind there is a screen
On both ways you can get in

Don't think twice before you listen to your heart
Follow the trace for a new start

What you need and everything you'll feel
Is just a question of the deal
In the eye of storm you'll see a lonely dove
The experience of survival is the key
To the gravity of love

The path of excess leads to
The tower of Wisdom
The path of excess leads to
The tower of Wisdom

Try to think about it ...
That's the chance to live your life and discover
What it is, what's the gravity of love

Look around just people, can you hear their voice
Find the one who'll guide you to the limits of your choice

But if you're in the eye of storm
Just think of the lonely dove
The experience of survival is the key
To the gravity of love.
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Chapter three
speed chase KIAN

KITT is now speeding across the ground closing in on the much slower KIAN.

KITT: michael devon was right KIAN is much slower.

Michael: Good this won't be as hard is I thought.

KITT: Michael KIAN has a link to me that bonnie installed we can use this to an advatige

Michael: Alright then lets see what she has to say.

The link starts off as a soft static noise but finally KIAN's voice speaks threw

KIAN: leave me alone.... I...Just want to be left alone.....please

Michael: No can do ether you give up or we will make you give up.

KIAN: fine its a speed chase you want its a speed chase your going to get

KIAN speed kicks up more but its nothing KITT can top of.

KITT: michael she sounded like she was crying that can't be true.

michael: I know pal its because she is programed with emotions

KITT: We can cut her off once we get ahead

KIAN: Thats what you think.

KIAN uses ski mode between two trucks she stops between the two leading both of them to crash.

Michael: Can we turbo boost.

KITT: No michael.

Michael: where is KIAN.

KITT: out of my scanner range sorry michael

Michael: Its ok pal lets head back now.

KITT: alright michael.

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Post by kido » Fri Aug 27, 2004 9:07 pm

Good and some what funny as well,KAIN is a nutcase of emotions. :D :P
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Post by FuzzieDice » Fri Aug 27, 2004 11:43 pm

Maybe you two could have it so KIAN meets KIDO who tries to convince KITT to take her back and not deactivate her, and KIDO and KIAN become fast friends or something? Like a message-based RPG thing? :)

I like the story so far though.

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Post by K.I.A.N » Sat Aug 28, 2004 12:20 am

I have the hole plot of the story figered out already so im not going to change anything the next chapter will ether be up in a few hours or tomorrow yay some people posted thanks kido and FuzzieDice.
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Post by FuzzieDice » Sat Aug 28, 2004 2:00 am

Will look for the next installment. :) This is an interesting story. Keep working on it. :)

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Post by K.I.A.N » Sat Aug 28, 2004 4:43 am

im trying to get a theme song for every chapter but a few will not have a theme song.

"Missing"
by evanescence
Please, please forgive me,
But I won't be home again.
Maybe someday you'll look up,
And, barely conscious, you'll say to no one:
"Isn't something missing?"

You won't cry for my absence, I know -
You forgot me long ago.
Am I that unimportant...?
Am I so insignificant...?
Isn't something missing?
Isn't someone missing me?

Even though I'm the sacrifice,
You won't try for me, not now.
Though I'd die to know you love me,
I'm all alone.
Isn't something missing?
Isn't someone missing me?

Please, please forgive me,
But I won't be home again.
I know what you do to yourself,
I breathe deep and cry out,
"Isn't something missing?
Isn't someone missing me?"

And if I bleed, I'll bleed,
Knowing you don't care.
And if I sleep just to dream of you
I'll wake without you there,
Isn't something missing?
Isn't something...

Chapter four
KARR's return and a untimely capture

Devon: michael I have bad news.

michael: Great just what we need more bad things.

Devon: KARR has been rebuilt. Who rebuilt him we are still trying to find out. We think KARR may want to use KIAN to get rid of you and KITT. We need you to get KIAN before KARR does.

Michael: KITT knows where KIAN most likely is hiding but how are we going to bring her back here she will try to run again

Devon: bonnie is working on that right now.

We now find RC bonnie KITT and michael in the semi.

KITT: I still can't believe it. She is.... different.... its strange.

RC: pink KITT pink you can't trust pink.

KITT: She believes she is going to be deactivated agian

Bonnie: Well I have figered it out. KIAN is completely self automated no buttons nothing but there is a two red wires if you cut them she will not have any control over the car then you can drive her back here.

michael: But how am I going to get in.

KITT: I can use the Microwave jammer.

michael: well lets head out

KIAN was atop a hill far away from michael and KITT the sun would rise in a few hours she knew the best place to hide for the day. she would only move on at night. She picked a small town to stay in for the night. the wind blew softly over the small hill. it was much better this way she would never have to worry about being deactivated again. she suddenly pick something up on her scanners

KIAN: who are you? show yourself!

KARR: well isn't it KIAN I missed you for such a long time

another scanner lit up it belonged to KARR.

KARR: I saw you stop KITT and knight back there. You know they will hunt you down and capture you. So I was wondering if you would like to join me...together we can kill knight.

KIAN: I....I

KARR: No need to rush yourself. I will give you some time to think.

KIAN drove off to leave KARR she made her way to an alley way hoping it lead out the other end but instead it was a dead end she tern around only to be met by a red scanner she was pined to the wall before she even knew what was happening.

KITT: michael hurry get in her.

michael got into KIAN and cut the two wires.

KIAN: what do you think you are doing.

She tryed to hit the gas but there was no luck.

KIAN: Damn whats happening.

KITT: We are taking you back.

KIAN: No.

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Post by kido » Sat Aug 28, 2004 5:51 pm

Its forshadowing somthing,gotta read more. :)
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Chapter five
A Talk between Friends Sort Of

The day had been very boring for KITT as soon as they had KIAN back michael went to get some rest. bonnie was working on something in the semi and RC was up to something as well. it was 10:13 it was late. KIAN was next to him her scanner very slow giving off a sad woosh.

KITT: Well you see we have not deactivated you. you dont have to worry now.

KIAN: I don't care. I will find a way out of here.

KITT: You don't have to....stay here. I have been thinking about you your like a sister to me.... I feel like I have to protected you

KIAN: Well don't you have knight to worry about. you....you don't know...what its like to be deactivated.

KITT: I may have not been deactivated yet but I have had my share of something like deactivaton.

KIAN: when your I deactivaton you can't move....feel.... you can't do anything but think.....all those years.....it was so horrible

KITT: But now you won't be. you know I can make it so you can move again.

KIAN: but you can't trust me

KITT: I trust you. you trust me

KIAN felt power flow threw her again. she spoke softly

KIAN: Thanks

KITT: As long as you trust me.

KITT powered down and went into recarge KIAN was about to do the same when the gerage door opened. The yellow scanner that belonged to KARR gleamed evilly in the darkness

KARR: Come KIAN.

CHAPTER SIX
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Now the siblings meet at last... :twisted:
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Post by K.I.A.N » Sun Aug 29, 2004 6:33 pm

chapters are going to be short I keep getting interrupted.

you
by EVANESCENCE

The words have been drained from this pencil
Sweet words that I want to give you
And I cant sleep, I need to tell you... goodnight

When we’re together I fell perfect
When I’m pulled away from you I fall apart
All that you say is sacred to me
Your eyes are so blue, I can’t look away as we lay in the stillness
You whisper to me promise you’ll stay with me
Oh you don’t have to ask me, you know you’re all that I live for
You know I’d die just to hold you, stay with you
Somehow I’ll show you that you are my night sky
I’ve always been right behind you
Now I’ll always be right beside you

So many nights I’ve cried myself to sleep
Now that you love me I love myself
I never thought I would say that
I never thought there’d be you

Chapter six
calm before the storm

KIAN slowly made her way outside.

KARR: Come with me we are going to a storage there we attack knight and destroy hem forever.

KIAN: I don't want to help you. I want to stay here.

KARR: Thats funny because you don't get to chose.

One of KARR's doors opened reveling a tall orange haired woman. she stepped out of KARR her brown eyes seemed to glint with evil.

KARR: I didn't want to have to go to the extreme but now I have to. This is clover I believe you remeber her.

KIAN was shock she was the worker who had deactivate her. Clover had once worked for FLAG.

Clover: Well KIAN tricking you didn't work but this will.

Clover reveled a paper from her pocket she spoke one word and KIAN's CPU went nuts.

KIAN: What the hell was that.

Clover: Codes to override your system. You see when I worked at the FLAG I got to deactivate you but when I deactivated you I got to see your CPU and devon gave me the codes for your system it was the only way to deactivate you but I kept the codes and waited for you to be reactivated
so I could make you work for me. One day I found what was left of KARR and rebuilt him. When we get knight out of the way KARR is going to find a nice big bank and get all the money from it. A gift for rebuilding him and for helping him get rid of knight. It could have been the same for you but you had to join the wrong side and now you are unusfull with out the codes. good bye.

Clover said the rest of the codes and KIAN went still. the last words she said was.

KIAN: KIT....

KARR: that was I little to easy.

Clover: And it better stay that way. I have to get to reprograming her.

KARR: How are we going to destroy knight.

Clover: Simple you fire that laser of yours at KITT and KIAN. I order her to go head to head with KITT and it will blow all of them strate to hell. now lets get out of here

KARR Clover and the reprogramed KIAN left. But they had not seen the red scanner moving back and forth.

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Post by knightshade » Sun Aug 29, 2004 7:10 pm

It's an interesting script so far, K.I.A.N. Welcome to the fan fic world. :wink:

The reason you can't post in the Fic Archive is that it is for fan fiction that has already been posted in the main forum, the moderators move it to the archive. Also, typically we ask that people don't post stories directly in the forum, but provide a link instead. Since you're new at this, I imagine you don't have a website, but stories can be hosted for free at http://www.fanfiction.net and I'd be happy to help you with the process of getting your story posted there -- just send me a PM or email. Then you are more than welcomed to post announcements about the fic here, with a link to fanfiction.net

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Post by FuzzieDice » Sun Aug 29, 2004 7:50 pm

I'm enjoying this thread myself. :) Nice work KIAN! :)

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Post by K.I.A.N » Sun Aug 29, 2004 8:51 pm

I'm already on fanficton net im CTCD (courage the cowardly dog).
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Post by knightshade » Sun Aug 29, 2004 11:13 pm

When you upload your next chapter to fanfiction.net, post a link to the new chapter here so that everyone can stay up to date with it, without posting the complete text. Feel free to post a new reply every time you upload a new chapter. It's just that unless it's a short, one chapter kind of story, they get too big to be posted here (the site's already gone over it's bandwidth allotment this month). Thanks.

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how do I post links
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Post by K.I.A.N » Mon Aug 30, 2004 1:57 am

my next story it going to be just a game this may or may not be made because of school or I don't end up with a good plot for it. after this chapter all I can say is I created a fickin story that doesn't suck. you will ether be shocked or crying at the end of this chapter.

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The Storm

when day had come KITT explained to everyone what happened. He and michael where heading out to the warehouse he thought most likely to find clover and KARR. KITT had come up with a plan to make sure KARR does not have KIAN crash into him and that KARR does not fire that laser at KIAN or KITT. They would have an attack ageanst KARR with KITT's owen laser before KARR can use his owen KITT would then tackle KARR. KARR would blow up. Michael would stop clover and KIAN would get her programming restored. nether KITT or michael said a thing after leaving to stop there new enemys. michael finally spoke but KITT said something first.

KITT: michael Im sorry for allowing KIAN to move again and for not doing anything when KARR came.

michael: Its ok pal I understand. You have a sister now and she is inportent to you.

KITT: Michael your the one I have to protect not KIAN

Michael: Then why are you letting me get in danger's way.

KITT was stunned michael was right he had agnored hes programing.

michael: KIAN's been wearing off on you hasn't she

KITT didn't anser.

the plan went very wrong KARR and clover had knew they where coming all along KARR had shot KITT's and KIAN's the second KITT had come in.

KARR: Well you finally showed up. I knew KITT had seen everything that had gone on last night. I knew you where coming.

KIAN: And now its time for you to die.

KITT: michael please get out.

michael: KITT?

KITT: Trust me.

michael got out of KITT only to caught by clover who had a shot gun with her.

Clover: You come with me.

clover led michael outside.

Clover: the explosen will be huge I would let you stay there with you car but I want you to see the ruble that will be you friend after this.

KIAN was just at a point to ram KITT and destroy both of them.

The words have been drained from this pencil
Sweet words that I want to give you
And I cant sleep, I need to tell you... goodnight

KITT: You don't have to do this. Your good not bad. You would never do this.

When we’re together I fell perfect
When I’m pulled away from you I fall apart
All that you say is sacred to me

KIAN: My orders are absolute I will destroy you

KITT: Even if it cost your life.

Your eyes are so blue, I can’t look away as we lay in the stillness
You whisper to me, promise you’ll stay with me

KITT: I still trust you.

KIAN: You can't trust me.

KITT: Yes I can.

Oh you don’t have to ask me, you know you’re all that I live for
You know I’d die just to hold you, stay with you
Somehow I’ll show you that you are my night sky
I’ve always been right behind you
Now I’ll always be right beside you

KITT: you are my sister and I love you.

KIAN: Love me.

So many nights I’ve cried myself to sleep
Now that you love me I love myself
I never thought I would say that
I never thought there’d be you

KIAN's scanner slowed down and the kinder KIAN spoke up

KIAN: I'm sorry KITT.

KARR: No this can't happen

KIAN: yes it can. KITT fire a laser at him

KITT did so KARR was now piss.

KIAN: Go help michael KITT. I will get rid of KARR

KARR: you can't attack me. you will be destroyed

KIAN: So be it.

KITT: KIAN don't do this we can do this a different way.

KIAN: No I need my revenge.... Im sorry for the way I acted before...If it hadn't been for me you and michael wouldn't be in this mess.

KITT went to save michael and KIAN when to face her destiny. KITT had got rid of clove easily he had stoped near inch's away from clover michael got the gun from her and sealed the deal with I nice punch.

Michael: I know men are not to hit women but you well....

KIAN faced KARR scanner tracking back and forth slowly you are going to pay for what you did.

She moved up to KARR and the scanners touched

KARR: no!

KIAN:..........

KITT saw the blast his scanner slowed to a soft beat.

KITT: KIAN

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Post by TurbomanKnight » Mon Aug 30, 2004 2:45 am

KIAN (in the story) is starting to piss me off with the not paying attention crap. BTW, is KIAN pink in the story? Make us believe that Wilton had KIan painted pink. Such as, Wilton's wife and her love of pink. Or Wilton's daughter who he knew until she ran away at age 14. Also Knightshade, great job on all your stories. I haven't finished the Disinterated Series Yet but so far all the stries are great! And you too K.I.A.N. (from KRO :wink: )
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Post by K.I.A.N » Mon Aug 30, 2004 3:49 am

Please don't flame my character I have a lot of pride in KIAN so don't post if your just going to say KIAN is ticking you off because my storys are about KIAN yes KIAN is pink but does it mater she is my character and thats the way I want it. all I an saying is that it a letdown to me my storys are all based off KIAN so get use to it.
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Post by FuzzieDice » Mon Aug 30, 2004 7:46 am

You're doing fine. :) I'm enjoying the story. I can't wait to see the next installment. :)

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Post by FuzzieDice » Mon Aug 30, 2004 7:48 am

OH, and to post a link, just put the link between *url* tags:

[the_tag]link to your story[/the_tag]

Replace the words the_tag with url (I couldn't do it as it actually was because it would try to make a url out of it :) )

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Post by K.I.A.N » Mon Aug 30, 2004 6:09 pm

Well this is the final chapter. I was A little pissed off by TurbomanKnight but i'm over it.

chapter 8
love Is All It Takes

Clover was put in jail that simple ether way it wasn't going to make up for KIAN's death. KITT had changed he would almost never speak to michael. he seemed very gloomy. Bonnie had just come in to fix his scanner KITT almost always said something to bonnie when she came in but today he wasn't up to it. after fixing KITT's scanner bonnie finally said something.

Bonnie: Me and michael have something to show you.

KITT: Bonnie I.....

Bonnie: Trust me you will like it.

KITT went outside with bonnie he was about to get the shock of his life. there outside was A fix KIAN. Her scanner track softly.

KIAN: Well cars can be ghost to you know.

KITT: Whats....going on here.

KIAN: The damage was bad but both me and KARR's CPU where not destroed. Bonnie fixed me and now im back. KARR on the other hand CPU was put in storage hopefully to be there forever.

Devon: Well KITT now that everything is back to normal are you ready for some acton

KITT: of corse devon.

KIAN pulled up to KITT and spoke softly

KIAN: you still trust me

KITT: now and forever

THE END BABY

I couldn't think up a very good ending so this is what I came up with. what makes you think I wasn't going to bring back KIAN. here is the summery for the next story I may back it still in the planing stages

Just A Game

RC is picked to be a beta player for the most real VR game ever but when he doesn't come back KIAN in michael go to see whats going on they both go missing to KITT goes to see this VR game for himself but he is about to find out it may be more then just a game
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Post by knightshade » Mon Aug 30, 2004 10:29 pm

First of all, thank you TurbomanKnight, for your comments about my stories. As far as K.I.A.N.'s story though, please be more constructive when posting. Fanfic, like fan art, or replicas, or websites takes time and energy to create and people have a lot of themselves investing in their stories. Please try keep that in mind when posting about them. Thank you.

K.I.A.N., you need to post your story as a set of links. If you continue to post like this, the thread will be locked. I'd appreciate it if you would go back and put links in instead of your story text. If you don't know how, I'd be happy to do it for you. I don't mean to make things difficult for you, but the board cannot support posting large fanfic stories like this. Thank you.

Oh and good job with your first story. :wink:

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