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Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:41 am
by Drifty
I just read the new episode, all I can about it is....Lynda.....AWESOME!!!!!! I really like the way the story is working out and I also think the introduction of Alex is hilarious. But with Alex I would made David into the loving cheerful father just for a laugh lol. Just to see everyone's reaction!! This is definately one of the strongest episodes you've written so far and am liking the way Kitt is becoming very defensive of Kat. Also, the way you write Kitt is as if he's teetering on the edge and is at his own "crossroad" since his meeting with KARR. It makes for very interesting reading.

Keep up the good work & I look forward to the next installment.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:11 pm
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
I love it love it love it!!! I repeated myself...hehe. Oops. I'm a little...hmm...how can I explain it? Ah I know! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Great job! Can't wait for episode 12!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:43 pm
by My_Friend_KITT
I agree with both of you!
Lyn, your work is extraordinary in both your writing and your website!
I hope it continues for a very very long time...Like Season 4 maybe...*giggle*

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:06 pm
by Lynda414
Season 4? You're trying to kill me, aren't you? Season 2 is so far ahead as it is.

I'm glad that I've gotten such positive feedback from my storyline. I think it's really come a long way. The next few episodes will be lighter in tone, necause we all need a break from the drama. ^_^ Episode 12 will take place in Hollywood, while episode 13 promises to be very creepy. I hope everyone enjoys them!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:20 pm
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
But the drama is the waiting...hehe. Why would we try to kill you? Then we couldn't read the awesome series.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:08 am
by J_Spaced
Just wanted to add that I'm only half-way through but I'm really enjoying your fanfic too!
Awesome stuff!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 4:18 pm
by Lynda414
Awesome! Let me know what you think. No rush in finising it though. Episode twelve will take a couple more days.

Right now I am anxiously awaiting new pertaining to my novel. I will let everyone know what I am talking about when I get that news.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 4:38 pm
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! You keep making me wait! lol!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:49 am
by J_Spaced
I've just finished episode 11.
Fantastic stuff. Somehow you've taken the concept the TV series started with and made it into a much more realistic show.

I love the family atmosphere at FLAG and even though there are loads of characters it doesn't feel like you're bombarded with them.

More please!

J - Planning his own fanfic.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:37 pm
by Lynda414
J_Spaced wrote:I've just finished episode 11.
Fantastic stuff. Somehow you've taken the concept the TV series started with and made it into a much more realistic show.

I love the family atmosphere at FLAG and even though there are loads of characters it doesn't feel like you're bombarded with them.

More please!

J - Planning his own fanfic.


Thank you! I love getting feedback.

I've spent the first eleven episodes very much inside of FLAG. I was developing the place and the people it contained. Now, with episodes 12, 13, and 14 I am taking KITT and Kat out of FLAG more, with missions that last over several days. The other characters will fade into the background just a bit as Kat and KITT are out there, saving the day, but they won't be gone entirely.

They have been developed, so I don't need so much time with them. Plus, the Underground Facility is a very prominent setting in the Season Finale. That's when we really get back to the drama.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:40 am
by My_Friend_KITT
Season Finale :cry:

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 3:09 am
by Lynda414
My_Friend_KITT wrote:Season Finale :cry:


Yes, season. Not series. Don't be down, we still have a long way to go.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:58 am
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
When is 2nd season then? I don't like waiting. :P but if I have to, I have to.

My_Friend_KITT, Turn that frown upside down and be happy. We still have 3 or 4 ep left. :D

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:01 pm
by Lynda414
Season one will have 22 episodes in it, so you guys shouldn't worry about the season finale right now. There will be a hiatus between seasons, but I am not sure how long. I will need to recharge my batteries and such.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 2:57 am
by Sky_Blue_Civic
I hope that hiatus helps with creating more awesome writing! :D Gotta help your creative juices!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 12:07 pm
by Lynda414
Well, before I even started writing season 1, I spent a good bit of time outlining in my head everything that would happen in the season. What the overall story arc would be. I didn't plot out each episode, but I knew where I would eventually end up.

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:58 am
by Lynda414
Episode twelve has started! Check out chapter 1 here! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4948800/1/KR2008_Alternate_Storyline_Episode_12

This time Kat and KITT are in Hollywood, on a movie set. The Crawler has sent them to stop a serious of very dangerous happenings, all targeting the lead actress. What seems like a simple mission for a supercar is more than it appears to be...

Enjoy!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:59 am
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
Loved it! Awesome Awesome Awesome!!!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:34 pm
by Lynda414
Hello all! Long time, no post!

I wanted to tell everyone that I have definitely NOT been idle. I've been hard at work creating another site for my storyline! Check it out at http://www.kras.weebly.com

This site will let me do things that I can't do over at fanfiction.net. It's not finished yet, though. Before I post the address on ff.net, I want my readers here to take the site on a test drive. Let me know any problems that pop up.

Thank you!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:56 pm
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
Looks good.No let me refraise that. Looks AWESOME!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:30 am
by Lynda414
*hugs* Thankies!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 9:05 am
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
*hugs back* Welcome!

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:01 am
by My_Friend_KITT
Happy
Birthday
Lynda
and
Many More!!!!!!!!


:kittconv:... :kittconv:... :kittconv:... :kittconv:

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:02 am
by KITTANDBILLYLUVER
Happy Birthday Lynda! Hope your day is awesome! :D

Re: KR2008 Alternate Storyline

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 7:28 pm
by My_Friend_KITT
As a small birthday present,
I offer you a link to a very very funny cartoon! Enjoy!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bETCusT5kNM

Hapy Birthday again!